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IP:
LostChild had a lot of good punches, but they were nearly all along the same lines. Yep, she's a she, but you gotta vary that shit up. Flow and structure were good. I liked your rhyme. The punchlines were fuckin' funny. Disaster, you came out swinging and hit good.
You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
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Liked that a lot.
Overall, I think Disaster gets it, although you were both close on all fronts.
Vote=disaster
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