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Old 04-22-04, 10:07 PM   #21
Whiskey
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LostChild had a lot of good punches, but they were nearly all along the same lines. Yep, she's a she, but you gotta vary that shit up. Flow and structure were good. I liked your rhyme. The punchlines were fuckin' funny. Disaster, you came out swinging and hit good.

You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
^^^
Liked that a lot.

Overall, I think Disaster gets it, although you were both close on all fronts.

Vote=disaster