i was feelin fatals verse it was nice.....had some good punches wordplay rhyme scheme flow structure good piece beggining to end as for jay u had an aiight verse but your structure i aint feelin...how you write your verse doesnt sound good u had some good punches tho didnt flow to well not an easy read....

my vote: fatal

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