retired.
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IP:
Ok, its like this. Marv, you started hot, but then fell off. If you had kept it consistent, you would have won, but you didn't. The first bars had it all, personals, nice wordplay, original punches, and decent enough flow. Then you started stretching lines, your punches fell off, your originality went away... not solid.
Murderous: you didn't have any single punch that was quite as good as the m&m one, but you came solid throughout the verse. The supersoaker line is started to be played, but still not bad for a closer. I only wish you had more personals... but still you had nice flow, good punches and kept it pretty original throughout.
v/Murderous
Hit back my battle against J_Rip (sig)
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