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Old 04-23-04, 12:26 PM   #20
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PART 1 ...... 35/50
I beat this fool once puttin a dent in his armour//
Now I’m gonna break through and make sure that I harm ya//
^^^^^GOOD.....FLOW 7
I spit with tha best and dropping u again is my quest//
I hope u don’t get vexed when I split a hole through ure chest//
^^^^^^NICE WORDPLAY 7..
This fool mesmerized wantin to join tha G-Unit//
But the only shit he qualified for is tha backstreet unit//
^^^^PERSONALS........7
He’s a life sucking disease 100 percent bacterial//
And I’m a lay down the truth, he downloads all his material//
^^^^^^NICE BAR....7
If he was an STD for sure he’d be chlamydia//
I’m a get the only vaccine so I can finally be rid of ya.//
^^^^^^NICE BAR 7 ...

PART 2 37/50
Now its time for part two of me spittin my lyrical curse//
Mic-wrecker wanted me to spit first so he cud feed off my verse//
^^^^^GOOD PERSONAL 7
U gonna get eaten alive cuz franchiZe is gonna elect ya//
To be the next dinner guest with the one Hannibal Lecter//
^^^^^^^NICE FLOW.. 8
U talk about history repeatin but I already hold a win over you//
So u right when u say it repeats itself cuz now I’m gonna get number two//
^^^^^^^^^O.K BAR....7
And fuck man its about time you quit wit tha homosexuality//
Don’t u know that shits played out, get sum fuckin originality//
^^^^^^^^^^SIMPLE....6
The time draws to a close and ure second loss beckons//
Call me Nicolas Cage cuz this shit will be ‘Gone in 60 Seconds.//
^^^^^^^YOUR BEST BAR......9