View Single Post
Old 04-23-04, 02:27 PM   #23
Shadows edge
retired.
 
Shadows edge's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,666
From: Urbana
IP:

aight shady.. your punches were kinda played, your verse was too short, your flow wasn't great, your rhymes were ok. work on upping the vocab and wordplay and coming with consistent punches, also try to flip some cliche lines and work on some original punches.
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!