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yo overall i'd give this verse a 8/10 it had its strong and weak points juss like any other verse but i liked the KINGS/STOYAKAVICH line and the GONE IN 60 SECONDS. You need to work on putting commas on ur writings tho (hard to read) and try not to have so many simple rhymes in there. Stay Up Son...
HOLLA BAK AT MY KEYSTYLE
"BLOOD, SWEAT, TEARS"
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''
why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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