That was really good. Another poetry head im hopin. Cause i need a couple cats up in here keepin it active. This had really nice mind imagery, you knew what he thought without going into his mind. It had great emotion during hte phone call, but the end i liked too because though it was lacking emotion it kind of fit the mood. If something like that happened you will most likley not deal with it and block it out, leaving no emotion. But thats just my idea, Great piece i want to see some more from ya in the future.

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