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Old 04-23-04, 09:26 PM   #14
$$UPREME
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i piss on yo grave fo sayin my raps aint raw
bitch i come and split yo wig wit a fuckn chain saw
man ill spit in yo casket and blow a few holes in yo hearse
ill rather go 2 jail 4 murder than snatchin a purse
i want u 2 know that i was foolin around wit yo wife
fuck shootin u ill stab u wit a fuckn kitchen knife
u cant battle u write all yo rimes in advance
i bet u sittin rite now wit yo note pad on yo pants
u a pussy when u pee u sit on tha seat
i took all yo punches and im still on my feet
u gone lose this battle but u gone be aight
but 4 rite now .... get tha fuck off this site
^^^^^^^ GOOD BATTLE ^^^^ BUT THAT VERSE WAS WEAK!~~~~~~
ELEVATE..........
FRANCHIZE...
I EXPECTED MORE~~~~~
BUT YOU STILL MERKED .... HIM`
FLOW-F
VOCAB-F
PERSONALS-F
STRUCTURE- NEITHER...BUT IT WENT TO SPIKY