I’m a fuckin mage, full 2 the brim with rage, u cudn’t hit me wit a fuckin 12 gauge//
Step into the rap cage, and spit a page, but ure ass cant rap it belongs backstage//
And crikey, what kinda name is spiky, man I’ll fuckin cripple ure psyche//
I push nikeys, this is b.ball u wanna be like mikey, u beat me…not likely//
And 2k8 man its 2k4, my rhymes are hardcore, leave u bloody on the floor//
But I luv gore, so I’ll make u bleed some more, ure raps put the whole crowd to sleep…my god was that a snore//
Put u on the spot, blow ure ass off wit a gunshot, leave u at a graveyard for ure ass to fuckin rot//
I got a grand plot, surround ure ass wit the rap SWAT, I’m the G-Unit but a G-UNot//
I leave u paralysed, toss ure ass outside, get nails and a cross and have u crucified//
I’ll let u decide, is this suicide or homicide, fuck that……it’s a fuckin rap genocide//
I can see ure fear, it shows every time I appear, cuz u know ure death is about to draw near//
I take military gear, shove a grenade up ure rear, have u blowin up quicker than Eminem’s rap career.//
I lead the rap wave, my skillz is what u crave, u aint even worthy to be my rap slave//
But I gotta say, battling me was fuckin brave, to pay u back I might not shit on ure grave//

Don't type out full bars like that, it's annoying. Also, get more personals and punches in there... work on setup lines. You elevated alot since we battled though. Props.

piss on yo grave fo sayin my raps aint raw
bitch i come and split yo wig wit a fuckn chain saw
man ill spit in yo casket and blow a few holes in yo hearse
ill rather go 2 jail 4 murder than snatchin a purse
i want u 2 know that i was foolin around wit yo wife
fuck shootin u ill stab u wit a fuckn kitchen knife
u cant battle u write all yo rimes in advance
i bet u sittin rite now wit yo note pad on yo pants
u a pussy when u pee u sit on tha seat
i took all yo punches and im still on my feet
u gone lose this battle but u gone be aight
but 4 rite now .... get tha fuck off this site

terrible. you gotta elevate in everything... punches, setup, personals, creativity.

v/ franchiZe.

hit up my battle agaignst J_Rip in my sig.

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