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Old 04-24-04, 03:03 AM   #12
Triple_N
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Weak battle overall....madd hatter, u had one good line which was line 2(ninja turtle shit) the rest needed alot of work, weak opener, really weak closer, structure was a lil off, but it flowed ok, wordplay was there but weak, no multies, u gotta up ya game son, decent, respect
Da Vinci....kinda weak but better that his^^Nice opener wit wordplay an multies, kinda went downhill from there, but you used good multies, but ya punches were solid an consistent every bar was a punch(thumbs up) good finisher, good flow, an structure, an vocab usuage was real good(feelin' it) opener won me over, good verse, stay up, respect
Vote: Da vinci
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