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Old 04-24-04, 03:48 AM   #10
Da Vinci
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not much of a battle here, wasn't really feel'n these punches
"tip cant bear the embarassment' of having a chick wip
leave ya vegative mode with my pimp hand quick"

"ya see the trick is you dont fuck with this bronx soldiette fuck u and your whole entire set
you say u a thug u never broke a sweat my persona- got u gonnas -in my sauna -got u pet"


This was a good opener, had me laugh'n
"U to gay to rap, u take more cumshots than diapharms
You stay talkin' bout all the heat ya rhymes bring
But forget to mention that u eat more ass than g-strings"

Demobx, yer verse was hard to follow cause the flow was kinda choppy, either the lines was to long or to short there was to parameter, or hence (flow)

I'd give this to Triple N for flow and punches,
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