Here's how I saw it.....

Eki came OK in this one but had some played out punches. You started with the most played line in here. Maybe back when you wrote it, it wasn't that played but it is now...... you had a choppy flow in some spots which dfinately took away from your verse. Bretheren came with better punches and wordplay. His flow was a little choppy in spots too but the punches definately made up for it.......

Vote - Bretheren

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