fatal u had some gud flow makin it easy for me to get into ure spit
ure structure was good to but cud use a little work. u used gud vocabs and had a good rhyme scheme goin, u had som gud punches and i felt ure shit from start to end
jay ure gud for a newb but ure structure was wack, no offense. ure flow wasn't that gud and ure punches were aight but they didnt really connect.
from what i've seen on this site u need to elevate a lot, both of u, start usin multis and personals alot cuz that shit get u a lot of victories.
Vote - Fatal

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