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Old 04-24-04, 11:52 AM   #3
Identity2k
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From: 3*0*5
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yo this shit was pretty tite and i especially liked the line that had to do with the SOURCE/MICS. the ending line was tight also but wat i didnt like is that there was a force rhyme in there (through ya city/authenticity) but other than that the shit was hot. good work son.

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