Well Jay Dog,you had some OK punches,but flow was bad and get rid of fillers.poundin on your head with a mother fuckin mace/
knockin you straight out of this fuckin race, put your ass back into place/
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see,the problem with these are that you had "mother fuckin" in 1st. line as a filler.I don't know if you trying to look hard or what,but get rid of it.It ruins the rap's flow and structure.But still,I 'm seeing an improvement in each&every rap u do.Keep goin Jay Dog.You gettin better.No matter how much u lose,don't give up.

Vote-Killah Boy

Come on guys,I voted in ur honestly,now return the favor.Go in front lines and to the raps that says Shady1132.