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Old 04-24-04, 12:09 PM   #21
PoLiFicK
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dis was really a sloppy battle
va2 u came wit some alright shit some tite punches and sum tite vocab
the one yo strucutre was fucked up u had some ite shit but yo structure was fucked up

the one
bestline-only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served

^^ ite line

worsteline-i could stop right there and still pull off a win and if this faggot runs his mouht im gonna pull off his skin


wack^^^

v2

bestline-yo insults suppose to hurt they didn't work,when i spit dez verses itta be tyme 4 you to merk\\

^^ ok

worsteline-its gonna be rain playin out lyrics,so much rain flood of flows da word will hear it\


one-

open-7/10
punches-7/10
personals-7/10
structure-6/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
close-8/10
overall-7.2/10

v2-
open-8//10
punches-7/10
personals-8.2/10
structure-8.7/10
vocab-8/10
flow-8.1/10
close-8/10
overall-8.1/10

winner-v2
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