Alright' ... Take This Or Leave It!! (My Advice To You) - - - No Disrespect!

First: You Aint Need To Use (.........) In Your Shit Fucks Up Your Flow, And Throws Your Structure Off Balance!!

Second: No Need To Put Some Of Your Shit In Caps' .. For Real! This Also Fucks Up Your Flow' Unless You Are Trying To Get A Point Across' ... lol!!! Aight!!

Thirdly: You Could Use Some Work On Your Vocabulary, Wordplay, & Your Multies' ... Also Creativity!! And It's All Good From There!!


Overall It Was A Pretty Safe 'Verse' ..!!! (Nice Work)


Try Out For "LyriKal DestruKtion": Drop A 6-10 Lines In There And Me And Killah Bwoy Will Let You Know If Your In Or Not' .. If Your Still Looking For A Crew!' ..

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