nice open mic for ur first time.....ur flow needed werk b/c of stretched lines....but u had good energy in it....kept on ur topic.....the finishing bar was killa.....otha than that bar this was my fav....
cause they automatically assume were bad so we must be dumb
and uneducated and fuckin menaces to society
they tell us to straiten up and good things will come... thats a lie to me
this was very good....could use a lil more wordplay....but fasho for ur first open mic......this ish was hot.....keep writin.....

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