Actually, I thought this was a pretty decent battle.. hatter you've been elevating, this verse is certainly better from a flow and originality point of view, all you gotta do now is take those punch concepts and make them a bit harder.. the personals at the beggining were nice but the verse at the end was a bit weak. for instance, that "restart" punch could have been a lot better, but I like the concept a lot.
da vinci: your verse was pretty solid, consistent, except the first two bars just sucked. you would have had this by a lot more, but those first two bars were just terrible... however you brought enough fire at the end (and the third bar) to eek out a win.
vote back on shadow v black thief...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=119910&page=3