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Old 04-24-04, 06:40 PM   #3
Identity2k
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From: 3*0*5
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shit was tite homeboy and i really liked the ending line to the first verse, shit was raw. i was a little disapointed in some of forced rhymes and some of them didnt rhyme but other than that, shit was hot. Thanks for the feedback on my shit holla bak.
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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