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Old 04-24-04, 10:33 PM   #11
Da Vinci
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Seein as how you two are both vets, I'll put some work into this. I'ma post my vote for it, and then when you vote on mine I'll poll it. (plus it will be good get'n vets to vote, they tend to be straight up)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615

so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him...
tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins...
-strong opener, I give it an 8

obviously records dont mean shit, he cant even get into my crew...
ive heard of battlin less talent to boost ur record, but why newbs?...
-a decent punch, I give this a 6

L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable...
on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable...
- Fuck, I was laugh'n my ass off when I read the first line, I give that punch a 9

and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
-I like how you say'n somthin while battle'n - 7

u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b...
- Like the previous, and I like the second line here I give it a 7

ur terrible, shit, half the vets dont even know L.I....
u make no difference on this site bitch, u may ass well die...
-I thought this one was weak, wasn't really feel'n it,-5

no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made...
u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days...
-This was a tight closer I give it a 9

Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter...
In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better....
-This is a pretty good opener I give it a 7

Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin...
This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!...
- Maybe its just me but I wasn't realy feel'n the second line, here the first was good and I thought you could have really gone places with it, so I'm give this a 6

Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
-With the first line, this is getting a little off topic, very personal, but you recovered with the second line. Nice punch. -7

Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies...
-I thought this was better that kunivas newbie punch- 7

Just had to challenge me to get pay back and be reimbursed...
We battled last month, all that time u could only come up wit that verse?!?!...
-This seemed to me like it was a bit of filler, or possibly too much leading, 6

Biggest freeposter alive thats why your post count towers...
Look how much he already posted and its only been open an hour!!...
-This was an dynamic punch-9 had me laugh'n 9

Lost the first battle, and now this one is ur second chance...
Just like 'colorado', your record's gonna have an 'avalanche'...
Not a bad punch Id give this a 7

So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again...
Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend...
-Again this is too personal, it seems to soft for battle'n, I give this a 7

TOTALS:
Kuniva-51
L.I-56

But L.I your verse was longer, so I actually ended up adding 7 (for your last two line) whereas Kuniva didn't have. If this were how it would go then by definition the person who had the most lines has the greatest likelyhood of winning. I thought Kuniva had better flow and multis, because of the use of those, I'm give'n him the win, but this was one of the closest battles I've seen. I'm sure your last one, had I had the pleasure of reading it, would have been the same.
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