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IP:
Aight, check it. Very tight battle, both of you came with real personal verses. Neither of you had great structure, your lines were either right at the edge of good or too long.
Fav lines from Kuniva:
"and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b..."
Nice way to flip the loss, cuz it was a DQ. However, you maybe should have stuck that second bar after your opener, it would have made more sense there. Anyway, very nice verse, though you had some problems with wording, and you wasted what could have been a nice punch (LI = lyrically incapable) because you jsut stuck it in there randomly with no setup line or anything.
LI: Yeah.. had some structure problems early on there, way too long on those lines. The vitamin, let him in line was nice.. but you could have easily made that shorter and it would have been nicer.
Best lines:
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Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies..."
Very, very nice.. especially the second punch there (LMAO kunvia.. challenging newbs.. come on).
So, very tight.. but I gotta go with Kunvia by just a bit because he had more consitency... like that "freeposter" stuff was just whack.. who cares. LI, if you had closed with those bars I quoted above, in reverse order, and added another decent punch to your verse, I think you would have had it.
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