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Old 04-24-04, 10:45 PM   #6
Shadows edge
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OK, this is my explanation.... admins put my damn vote back up!

Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom
very nice opener, tight punch
went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back
Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack
very weak.. killed the momentum
Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation
What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info)
aight.. class sic has a good reputatin (on this site) but your second line was a decent punch
We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop
I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop
charity.. drop.. wha?? the second line is.. bleh
u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic
ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic
whack
u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won
u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun
pretty nice, even though inflammatory gun is not a word
when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site
u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light
not bad, not great
opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon
Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin
pretty ok, kinda stretched though
I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain
I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again
like they said, doesn't really rhyme, and not that great a closer


I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw...
Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow...
ok wordplay, not a great opener, but an ok punch second line
Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route...
What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out...
kinda stretched first line, ok multi, nice personal though, but "route" and "out" don't really rhyme
Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display...
Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say...
haha.. very nice, very nice
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help...
You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt...
brail/felt lines = played.
Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known...
Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin...
decent
Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight...
Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site...
nice, nice
Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes...
Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes...
haha... very nice personal
Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk...
I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk...
meh.. not great
Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?...
Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first...
pretty nice personal
Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression...
Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant...
better closer than quick


ok so like i said, both came kinda inconsistent but LI had more consitency, and he came more personal with his flow. now put my vote back up.
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