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Old 04-24-04, 10:47 PM   #21
Da Vinci
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Well this was a one sided battle obviously. You'll proabably say that this is a hate vote cause Vinman didn't vote for me, but as you will see, this thing is going 5 and 0. So before you start to bitch just wait and see.

Vinman, the reason I was bitching was cause you gotta explain your votes. I'll lead by example.

Im a lyrical soldier of fortune
Imma have this cat popped like a balloon
- this was an okay opener, i give it a 6

Pity this cats only 14 years old
He’s like a good spliff…he’s rolled
-again an alright punch-5

Yo this boy’s hating on my flow
Tho he’s sniffin White Powder like WHOA
-like how ya made it pesonal and brought in his name 7

This boy’s from chi-town..hes gone with the wind
Like an indian imma leave this cat skinned
-nice muliti which picks the flow, -8

He said his cousin got capped
Imma leave him like garbage.. hes scrapped
-Kinda weak, -5

This guy ain’t got no rhymes
Hes gonna end up snortin my lines
-this was a nice punch -8

When this cats dead his headstones gonna read
“This Cat Got Capped But Didn’t Bleed”
-was wonderin where you were go'n with this, but after I read the rest this turned into a good punch -8

Cause im poppin him with lyrical slugs
fuck this welfare kids’ bound to do drugs
-This was alright, 5 not much a punch here

Please keep him off the streets
Cause this cat still pisses in his sheets
-wasn't really feel'n it 6

That’s it imma hafta end this battle
And let this baby go play with his rattle
-a totally played out line, -4


spittin on this nigger cuse he straight up suck//
his nose so big that shit look like a duck//
-this is just whack, your talk'n bout his nose?-3

im fin to beat this nigger in a one round bout//
coming to house and kicking him out//
-need to elivate this- 4

i reall y didnt want to battle this lame//
maybe cuse of his 15 min of fame//
- a bit better, but the second line made no sense-5

he thinks hes the shit cuse his skin is white//
dont be surprised if that nigger likes to bite//
-this made no sense on one had your saying he's white and then saying hes black -0

he probably lives with old ass daddy//
well why not when he lives in the back of a caddy//
-ummm okay, this is just filler-3

that the end of the rap about white powder//
shit he screaming i bet even louder and louder
-again, you got nothing here, if thats a punch it didn't hit. 2

totals
Vinman- 17
Whitepowder-61
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