Li came hard on that one but i think quick puch got this one,Li was tight but the lines sometime seemed a lil' long but i liked how you used two rhymes in one line;
"I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw...
Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow..."
that shows skillfull writing even though it could ve touched up but good for this,
i like the words that qp used to end lines with like
"opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon
Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin"
that is a experimental writer in the works, i would vote but not enough posts.