Aight.. pretty tight from a technical aspect, I can certainly imagine it flowing well.. though id be nicer if you actually rapped it to a beat. Had multies in there, nice rhyme and shit. Ghangsta rap like that ain't really my fav... so I'm not gonna comment except to say it was pretty good for ghansta rap.

Peace.

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