i felt that shit all the way through...was very nice very very nice....keep it up....u proved u were a killah with that song...nice..keep it up...thats wht im talkin about..THATS TALENT....but try not to rap about guns and killin ppl so much cause u dont live that life and i hope u dont anyways....try rap about positive shit...shit uve been through or seen in the world...let niggaz kno whts up....not bout shit every1 wants 2 hear...bout guns and shit...thats why nas song i kno i can was such a hit cause no1 expected him 2 spit about reality...expected him to spit about killin a nigga or some shit or beefin...so it blew peeps away...try head that direction and u'll see u'll be very respected....keep it up...pce