i changed my title !!
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breakdown for killah bwoy:
flow:choppy for the most part in spots it worked but not well enough for me keep trying though 5/10
volcab:alright job i guess nothing special though 6/10
punches:some alright lines nothing i'm gonna quote though you know what worked and what didn't keep on it though 6/10
overall:17/30 well written verse with some room to improve
breakdown for shadows edge:
flow:good not above average but solid and better then your oppenent 7/10
volcab:alright you win here too 7/10
punches:some alright open disses and some basic personals nothing amazing but keep working on it 6/10
overall:20/30
vote--shadow's edge
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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