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Old 04-25-04, 08:05 AM   #14
Killah Bwoy
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ok my breakdown

dirtboy: horrible,terrible..duz not rhyme all aragono that does not rhyme check in and again duz not really rhyme then writen,losin,punchlining THAT DUZ NOT RHYME pussy and worry DOES NOT RHYME playa most of ya ish did not rhyme but the lines punches and structure was there

Hypnotic buzz:
ya shit was pretty sick,most of your shit rhymed i liked ya opener and i can tell you have potential nothin stood out though

vote: dawg i would of voted on dirtyboy but then i thought i could just type a hole bunch of sick punchlines without them rhyming and jus say thats my verse and thstas not really fare..so i give my vote to hydroponic buzz
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