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Old 04-25-04, 01:05 PM   #17
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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ok opener li
flow li kuniva u had an ok flow it was off in places though and u used the same word 2 make it rhyme
punches im gonna say li good on ur part though li
personals tie both came with mad personals
multis didny c any both could use work
vocab tie both were ok both could use a lil work though
closer tie li urs was 2 soft and kuniva he wanted out of we i no that
good verses from both id like 2 c another rematch i feel li,s verse came a lil harder though kuniva ive seen better from u
lookin forward 2 round 3
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