The Epitome Of Greatness
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this was a good battle franchize it looked like your first 2 or 3 bers were just filler to show off your multies...in my opinion use multies when dissing him brings a lot more intensity to your verse after those first bars tho u got into your flow and everything came out better...nice structure good wordplay good multies good punches overall u had a good verse
franchizes verse 7/10
daclassic i felt had a good opener but there was filler in his verse too not as much as franchize but u still had some good multies and punches...your verse was overall a easy read which is good and u lacked in ill punches but there were punches i would have to say that you tried to hard..but your last 2 bars were sick i was feelin them..great originality..good verse
daclassic's verse: 8/10
vote:daclassic overall good verses from both..but i think the last 2 bars won it for daclassic...good battle
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