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Yep.. flow intelligent had this one for sure. Bojangler.. you had the vocab category and you had nice rhymes.. but your punches were lacking. The personal with the name = brains spilling was nice.. but the rest of your verse was lacking bad. Flow meanwhile had sick wordplay, check it:
"you could fall in a "cardiac arrest" and your "heart still couldnt attatck"//"
Flow, you still gotta elevate.. a lot of your punches are kinda basic, but still a pretty decent verse. Both of you guys, concentrate on original, personal punches rather than wordplay n vocab. Work on using setup lines ot make your punches stronger...
Return the favor on Shadow v J_Rip
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