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Old 04-25-04, 01:56 PM   #11
Shadows edge
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^^ NO. STOP VOTING. Battles are won by punches, the rest is fucking window dressing. Who cares if he got a fuckign style? GKillaz, your verse lacked punches... they just weren't there. The forced internal rhyme scheme made it clunky as hell, and fucked up your flow with the constant commas.

E Looch, I think you had a couple nice punches (family tree shedding.. I really like the wordplay there). You did waste a nice setup line at the end with the fetus thing which was weak, but overall you had a pretty decent verse, with nice punches and good rhymes.

v/ E Looch.

Return the favor on my battle with Killah Bwoy.
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