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Old 04-25-04, 02:39 PM   #13
DeadLYVisiOnz
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E- Had nice punches betta wordplay some played lines but overall it was nice verse.

G- U tried to drop yo punches but some didnt land i dont like the way u bold it is herbish, 2 many damn comma's overall aight verse.

V/E

cuz punches were betta.

return the fav

me vs iNsidious
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