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Old 04-25-04, 03:05 PM   #11
E Looch
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tenken punchs were decent some of the didnt make much since to me cant say punchs are played cause most of them are had good worplay though just need to work on personals being worked in and punchlines hittin harder and that would of been a sick verse


mm pretty good verse overall opener was nice then it fell of for a few lines then picked it back up at the nend made up for the fall off pretty good punchs at then end just work on wording your set up lines better and stay awaay from michael jackson lines good verse though

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