Accomplishment
Shorten my first bar but i'm sitll killen you...
cuz for "chrits" sake, it will be less than 12 sylabals....
(it was aight open could of hit harder 7/10)
Kid takes my rhymes like they full of lead, he looks about ten, but his verse is already dead...
I laugh at what i read, you aint accomplishen nottin but the kid wit most hats on his head.../(it was an aight line but wasnt really feelin it (6/10)

ya lost back slumpin whit no poise, youngin commin at me wit fake pistols i dont fuck wit towyz...
kids rattle makes nothin but noise, cuz tha only "W" ya gettin is in Killah bo"W"yz.../
(wasnt feelin that line either u need to elevate 6/10
fuck "my riegn" you feelin my thunder-now, you'll be "six feet deep", thats how you went "underground"...( ilike this line it was cool 8/10
you lrycal skills are diminishin quickly thats a blunder wow, oh you battle accomp and lost i wonder-how.../(this was one of ur weakest lines so far 4/10 wasnt feelin it at all)
Y'all nyc rappers was cold...until the snow melted, come at me witcha paintball guns and i dont even leave welted...(aight wasnt feelin it 6/10
of course this kids a boy, like when he swings its unfelted, like who's his daddy when this bitch is gettin belted.../(it was an aight endein 7/10
overall 44/70 u could of came harder but it was aight A-B probably a C now onto killa