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Old 04-25-04, 04:21 PM   #17
iamthatdude87
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'Rhymes'll Break Ya Ribs...You couldn't spit heavy shit even if you "ad-libs(lbs)"../
Lines're sharp as box cutters, spit one bar and It'll cut a hole through the side of ya-crib../ (he lives in a cardboard box and my rhymes are box cutters..get it?)
(i kind of liked that opening pretty decent 8/10)
Dawg you losin' to a 14 yr old kid...and you consider that an accom-plish-ment.../
Drop a mine in ya hole,shut ya lid..Join Class-sics So I could "Stomp-this-kid".../(sig says stopmin ya'll out)(yo it was preety good 7/10)
Dawg Im SO SICK shove my verse up his ass Now he cryin' 'cause he has aids..../
If His Verse was a game you couldn't imagine how many lines this kid has "played"../
(wasnt feeling this this line 5/10)
You sayin' your worth millions? Shoot you 9 times now you no more than "50 cent../
Dawg You wack How often does this kid win!? less than 20 percent....../
(wasnt feelin it but pretty decent 6/10)
Battlin' this kid is a waste of time Like a Japenese Slut you'll get easy "WINS"..../
Each verse you drop is bad So guess you gettin' easy sins....../
(lmao that ending was funny 8/10)
overall 34/50 roughly 68% where accomplishment had 62% so killa gets my vote good battle