Yo i`ma have to break this in two comments


Quickunch - you came with some twisted and some nice punches the sex lines but some of the words you said were not rhyming like thought and spot and posting an dating so that dissapointed me other than that you had good punches and some good connecting vocab but u kept saying blah at the end (thinks that dint make sense) altogether i think this was slitghttly above average

Gkillaz - i liked your flow rhyming and scheme also you were making sense more thsn Quickpunch and your structure was tidy and you had good rhyming words i like the buffet rhyme



Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt...

^ lol at second line yo i`m gonn go with Gkillaz..
No beef , just voting fair.

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