Well I must say, that this was by far, vinman's best battle. This shit was way hotter than your last two.


look at this nigger im fin to hit all in all in his face//
when im im done with this bitch its gone be sereial case//
-this is a good opener, it was a good solid punch.

im gone to spit this nigger out of his shoes//
9 times out ten he is gona to lose//
-I like this also implying that the first battle he won was the 1 outta ten times he will win, nice punch

im gone beat him and give him a nice blow//
but all his hit are to fucking low//
-this was alright ya started to weaken here

i know that im not the best that yall seen//
but either is this nigger he a vampire fien//
-i wasn't really feel'n this ya need to tie it in like "he "sucks" more than a vampire fien" or somthing like that

im coming all the way from 63rd street//
hiting nigger with all my heat//
-this was alright again much better than your previous battles.

he says he's white and he beta than me/
how the fuck when this nigger ask like she (female)//
-again a good punch.

i say that this nigger gets louder and louder//
yea yall now that nigger white powder
-again you mentioned this in one of your first battles, not really feel'n the whole louder and louder bit.

All in all not a bad battle, I'm sure if ya kept battle'n and more importantly keep read'n other peoples battles to find out how to elivate ya game.

-punches-white
-opener-vinman
-flow-white
closer- white