close but weak battle guys...elevation needed in structure an vocab<espcially vocab...

Da had sum aight lines, although ya structure needs alot werk, pick ya vocab up to....the bar at the start that repeated, was kinda cool, i dont usually go for that sorta thing but its all good....

Verse 6.6/10

Kill....hmmmm sry m8 but aint to much to sa bout ya verse, i dint catch it atall, no offesnse but i jus dint feel it.....i understood sum parts but when i did the set-up lines was always betetr than the pucnh which aint good....

Verse 4.5/10


Vote da.....keep spittin yall

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