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Old 04-25-04, 07:04 PM   #22
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Well shit, when I read Unknown's verse I am sorry to say I thought he was in trouble. Then I read the preceding verse and knew that spikey was in trouble.

I couldnt follow these lines, if there were even punches here I don't know.

man that's rap'n it sound like something that u can
tap dance to/
i'm readn yo rap it made me want to look at map to see
where u from/
cause u aint from chicago cause it soungs like u readn
from a logo/
u aint from here u came from a country call hobo
where they teach u how to hoe though/
u sort like Vinman cant even spit right man/
u sayn momma jokes but yo mooma tha qauker oat
guy on the box of qauker oatmeal/
i aint tryn tobe like u sayn the yo momma jokes
but i best yo momma a hoes/

There was no rhyming scheme here, and like I said the punches, well is this one?
u sayn momma jokes but yo mooma tha qauker oat
guy on the box of qauker oatmeal/?

Both of you played the momma thing a little to much,
Unknown yo had a really good opener, I liked that one.

Because of Punches and I found it easy to read I'm give'n this one to Unknown
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