ok check it

verbally Demolish ya lines Step to me And You'll get blown away like a proximity mine.../
Ya Flow Ya structure ya rhymes it was all originally mine I gave it to you 'cause your ass-cheeks i wasn't tryna be-kind../

should have switched these around an it woulda have been better it was decent though

Fuck Shadows edge,drop a verse near his feet have him dodgin' my lines singin Killah's Pledge/
This kid jus' started rappin' and he's already "fallin' off" Take the Win push this kid over the ledge..../

another long ass line coulda have been worded beter at the end

Battle me and you'll lose ya life,lose ya nike's Jordan fans don't like me 'cause I rip up "mic's"(mikes)..../
Spit sharp lyriks like swords N' Pikes Now shadows runnin' down the street becuase he heard I rip up Dikes....../

good use of multies nice first line and decent punch again
lmao the rest i aint even feal like postin you know it wasnt even that good one of the weakest verses you done shoulda used shit like this against me lmao

I thought this cat might have skill.. but as luck would have it
This cat’s best chance of winning is with a three hour skit…
How he gonna win when his Barr(bar) wider than Roseanne?
That’s why when he look in the mirror he see his only fan…

i liked this nice shit good wordplay in and nice punchs

all the other shit to lazy to post up it was good in spots and bad in other spots some were pretty weak punchs should have just left out the chalk line thing overall though pretty good verse

vote shadows edge

rematch this though wanna see it again later

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