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Old 04-25-04, 08:03 PM   #10
Rising Sun
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You dont want this i'll get u ripped into pieces,be in multiple bodybags/
your govt name displayed gladly,but it aint for a win.it'll be for a bodytag/
i'll roast ya ass twice times over like twin hens in a rotissiere grill/
brand ya *nice*clothes *priceless* may as well call you the good will/
i'm so sick,i give you that AIDS.,from my lyrics you get granted zero IMMUNITY/
get a real life... 13-1 ya luck ends here,C S rules the RB COMMUNITY/
i'll get *fidel*,and have killa *mutilated* and get this nigga *castrated*/
VC your flow and vocab is sick, but some stuff didnt make sense. above are your best punches, and you came hard with them. nice personals but you need more metaphors, but wordplay is there. not much imagery though...but very very tight verse.

man this a tough battle cause gkillaz first half was bitten and didnt make sense but his second half was tight
How you gun put me in bodybags when your already in one...
You tried to shoot me but you had no aim with your water gun...
I am about to finish you off your off gun leave you in shock...
You dick Ride so much thats why you name is Vagina and Cock... (VC)
Altough your not going to get one vote becuase you dont flow you blow..
Gun shoot your from head to toe, my KO list your gun get burried below...
nice disses wit personals and structure...and imagery is nice...but you didnt have the vocab, wordplay of vc....and overall his stuff was better so i give it to him....nice battle though
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