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Old 04-25-04, 08:13 PM   #12
PoLiFicK
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dis was a real good battle i liked both flows had soem tite verses

certified came wit some tite shit he used some good ass vocab and had some good punches structure need work tho other than dat nice drop started off good wit his opener and closer

bestline-Spitting nitro on ya raps/ automatically 'combusting' ya verse into un-healthy propane gas,

^^ nice start

worste line-didnt have 1 none of yall linez came on da down side


real-
had a good flow u had betta structure dropped descent punches and came hard started off real good and ended on da same note

bestline-Did something speak? In the middle of your verse people get up and leave
This kid wears his mind on his shirt...that's why no tricks up his sleeve

^^^ start off was good

worsteline-Keepin em' there, this Charlie Brown falls so the greiving's unfair
If your dad were King, I'd suffocate him and relieve him of heir

didnt catch my eye ^^^

certifed-

open-10/10
strucure-7/10
punches-9/10
vocab-10/10
personals-9/10
close-9/10

real

open-9.5/10
strucure-9/10
punches-8/10
vocab-9/10
personals-8/10
close-9/10

winner goes to certifed he had betta vocab but his structure need work otha then dat his drop was hott and real u had a hott drop 2 juss dat his vocab got da big shout out of eirthing so good luck rest of da way

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