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Old 04-25-04, 09:15 PM   #11
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vc very long verse. close battle. you bring nice vocabulary, with a tacky lookin structure. work on it. flow wasnt steady due to the fact that when you here one rhyme it takes a while to get to the other. its not easily read. i have to find out where i left off at. a few punches here and there but none was a knock out. you lack personal issues against your opponent. you originality i tell you that. good for being creative. Still need to elevate

gkillaz close battle, did you put effort to this. this is just an average verse. Nice personal punch attack, the one about dick riding vagina and cock line. maybe the best punchline of this battle. you lacked vocabulary. and i know you can do better then this. nice structure and the flow was there. Feeding is basically your whole verse. did you read the rules. this should be a rematch.

v/vc
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