http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187
^vote in mine.I voted in ur's now vote in mine.



Deadly vision had the better flow here.But punches,I'd have to go with Deadly Vision as well.I liked that one bout shoving ur foot in his ass and making the rectum elestic.Insidous,your punches were lacking.U had a nice closer,but the rest wasn't.You got to make us laugh or be in shock.Make us feel like"OOHn Hell No,he didn't say that."And also,Master mind and I see suiside does not rhyme.In audio,you can find a way to make it rhyme,but in text,you got to remember that the reader will not say it in the way u would.Remember that in the future.That was sumtin that always used to messed me up.

Vote-Vision