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Old 04-25-04, 09:30 PM   #12
K-Trin
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Toxic waon this one easily.He had it in all catergories.Yugamo,try to make ur rhymes longer......they were way to simple.And try not to rhyme 2 same words together.If you got a really nice punch that has you rhyming 2 same words,then go for it.Never take shit out if you got a mad nice punch going.Punches has the biggest say in battles.But in ur rap,you rhymed "it" wit "it" and the punch was not all that.It hard to make a nice punch is ur lines are like 5 words long,so make it larger.When you get better,you will find out which lenght of ur lines u feel most comfortable with,so keep battling.Build ur skills up and challenge this guy again.
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