http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187
^^^vote in mines since I voted in urs.

Okay,let see.Dever,you need to read tutorials and and read these other guy's raps.Make ur raps longer.I'm not tellin u how long cause you gonna make that desicion ur self after u find out which lenght is most comfortable to you.But ur raps was not hard enough.Make the other guy feel stupuid.

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