Originally Posted by GKillaz05

I am on the first line, yet this battle is already comming to its end...
You could intertwine, wit 2pac and rap you still couldnt comprehend...

weak opener, self glorification

Thats why your done, Im beatin you wit shit that I'd use on a noob...
This has only begun, but by the end you gun be eating threw a tube...

ok.

Im about to change, changing up my style to put you in the graveyard...
You should exchange, exchange your style cuz you sound like a retard...

weak rhyme, bad structure

So get yourself ready, cuz the end is near killin you wit my little friend...
Hold onto your teddy, Im about to stear you off the bend this is the END...

punches comin whack man
Everyone know Ima win, put your money on your flow so I can take it...
Losing cuz you use a violin, for yor beats dawg your never gun make it...
umm... no. self glorification

Overall your just a fake, So this win will be easy one like the first grade...
ONE BIG ASS MISTAKE, Is what your labeled couldnt be saved if your prayed...

good first line, second line whack

Cocky bitches die first, thats why Im killin ya and ya want my help you mooch...
How do I lose to the worst, about to finish him, This is the 'END OF E LOOCH'