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Old 04-25-04, 11:08 PM   #8
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
Posts: 184
From: Northern California
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Def. Star had this battle. I don't know if you bit or not Air but I really don't car. You rhymes were too elementary and weak, you need to elevate on your punches and come at him with better personly's. Your structure seems good , but watch your wordplay, it threw some lines off. Def. Star had a better flow and has very personal, always a plus. Try to come at him with harder punches though Def. Your structure is decent and You both need Multi's, very important. Anyways Def. had the better flow.

Vote- Def. Star
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